User talk:Dimsimlord

Outworld Destroyer Intro
Response to your comment on my attempt at writing an intro:
 * Bad syntax: I can see I messed up in a few areas there, but errors are bound to happen when you're planning to write huge sums of text in one sitting. I barely took any breaks in writing this area and the items and tips section. The quick summary of his skills (He and his allies enjoy more-or-less unlimited mana because of his aura, he can protect himself or an ally, or disable [...]) is bad syntax itself. Didn't you notice that? I rewrote it primarily because of that.
 * Less informative: my plan was to flesh out his skill set right away. I wanted to move the fact about his item dependency down to the tips and items section. What I've forgotten is that it's better to mention this earlier. A mistake on my part, but I don't regret it.
 * Fallacious in several cases: Just how many cases, exactly? I can only see one area where I'm fallacious: the end sentence. This might not always be the case, but I was adding some intensity and drama to it. If you think about it, Harbinger will outshine his opponents if his Int is tons higher than theirs; firstly, he'll get a bigger mana pool, making his Arcane Orb more lethal. Secondly, his ult will always work and will always deplete their mana. I may be wrong about Arcane Orb being his main source of damage, but think about it. Sanity's Eclipse has a long cooldown, requires lots of mana to cast, and is ineffective against high Int heroes. Arcane Orb ignores all of that, and lets itself be auto-cast. And it's Pure damage. I don't see anything wrong with my Astral Imprisonment sentence. Essence Aura can indeed act as a passive support skill, because it's 1.) passive and 2.) you're helping your teammates regain their mana (in other words, supporting). I was, again, trying to add intensity to his ultimate's quick description.

What I'm trying to do is write a detailed intro, in a very short amount of time. I was more focused on writing his items and tips section because it was so disorganized. And when I see disorganization, I try to correct every single case of it. Hence, I forced myself to correct the intro a hurry.

Is it my mistake that I'm trying to do too much? You tell me. But, instead of indirectly correcting me, give me some advice, or at least help me out. Reach out to me. Use my blank talk page.

I also just find it weird that you're reverting to an older edit (with some added details) that takes out page links. You should've at least kept the links, instead of completely reverting it. I probably wouldn't even write this if you'd done that.

Whatever concerns you have, lemme know. I'll try to resolve them with you. I don't want to be your enemy. Beefcorporation 08:13, 28 October 2012 (UTC)